lukas reading learning story

Lukas reading Learning Story

My book is called Diary of a wimpy kid Dog Days.

The Type of book.It is a fiction book.

 I located information.

 So I found out that for Greg Heffley it's hard for him to stop playing video games even when it a very nice day outside.

I inferred an idea.I found out in the text that rowley and gregAre best friends.

I evaluated.If I was Greg's parents I would take Greg somewhere that he has never been to and spend the whole day with him and see if he likes it and then he can start coming out and having some more fun outside withFriends and family.

The purpose of the book.I think this book can challenge people that realyLike video games and someone that Will never.

I analysed and synthesised.So I think that the message in the story is tellingus to don't just spend your time playing video gamestry something new or do something else like Going for a work .

Why I enjoyed this book.I liked this book because it has made me think like should he actually be playing video games on a really nice day and it has made me think If I was him would I be doing that so It has made me wonder.
Here is an example of me reading my favorite text in my book:https://www.speakpipe.com/voice-recorder/msg/inpkq2a3rpnitsg1

Lukas reflection.I think that I was good at explaining my book to My reader.
I think that l need to work on making my writing More interesting.


Romans feedback : I like how you analyzed and synthesized and how you put yourself  in the book and how you thought what you would do if you were greg you need to work on giving more info on why you like it.

Cold and Unsloved

Cold and Unloved

Have you ever slept in a cold see through bottle dumped in the middle of an abandoned ocean ever since you were only a little girl?

Every day I can see people passing me thinking I’m some sort of a statue sitting there in a see-through bottle freezing to death. 

I wonder what it feels to be loved and to never sleep in a really cold see through a bottle in the middle of this ocean I have never seen before.

I can notice by looking outside that the weather is not going to be really good today. So I need to make sure I keep calm.

I could see the salty sea water crashing into rocks like we are in world war 1  just for 1 poor girl that couldn't be loved ever since she was born just because she looked different to her whole family.


I cried for mercy as I felt my head place down.
 I didn't know what was going to happen but I thought that it was the end for me so I closed my eyes,  didn't hope to die.

A few minutes later: I wake up from a deep sleep I wonder how long I was sleeping for. I'm still wondering if it was a dream or if I was actually trapped in a bottle.